Essay Review #2

After reading the comments on my essay on the speech patterns of Ophelia and Horatio, I believe that I have improved in the areas I had previously shown weakness in. I feel as though my structure, idea and topic sentences were much better than before; however, I still think I need to continue to work on these three areas as well as focus on broadening my vocabulary and diction. Furthermore, I learned that my essay should start off with a more direct approach and that I should not generalize my ideas at any point in my writing. Also, I should answer every question I raise in my essay to lessen the confusion or dissatisfaction of the reader.