The next three essays I read were: Control: How Jane Austen forces us to agree with Elizabeth's decisions by I for Imelda, The Ball's latest Gossip: Austen's use of Rumor as a Tool for Character Introduction and Development by O for Orlando, and finally Mrs. Bennet: Austen's Punching Bag by C2.
I for Imelda could have used better organization and structure in her introductory paragraph to set the reader up for what was to come. The topic sentences were a bit too sudden- which could be because the thesis was not clear enough. However, I for Imelda does not lack clarity. I was able to understand her ideas throughout the essay.
O for Orlando's introduction was a bit too wordy and a little difficult to follow. Though it was concise, he could have used much more powerful sentences to get his idea thoroughly across to the reader. Otherwise, I enjoyed reading this essay.
C2 was my favorite essay out of the three. The writing was clear, interesting, and structured well. It kept me interested throughout the entire essay.
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